Overview
Work History
Skills
Summary Section
Skills Section
Experience/Work History Section
Education Section
Grammar/Punctuation and Formatting
Timeline
Ramon Toro Bolier

Ramon Toro Bolier

Omaha,NE

Overview

1
1
year of professional experience

Work History

Elite Guard Plans & Programs

USAF
07.2024 - Current

Managed records and ensured accurate personnel security clearance verification using the Defense Information System for Security (DISS).

Ensured accuracy and timeliness during applicant processing.

Oversaw the administration of staff and data systems, maintaining regulatory adherence.

Developed comprehensive guidelines for routine security assessments and evaluations.

Facilitated leadership by furnishing critical information related to staff incidents.

Skills

  • Verbal and written communication
  • Physical stamina
  • Security protocols
  • Physical fitness

Summary Section

  • You should always keep your target position in mind. Write your summary to show how your experience and skills will easily translate to your new position.
  • A good test of a summary is to take it completely out of the document and see if it makes sense by itself in just3-5 sentences. Unfortunately, your summary section is overly wordy and bogged down with too much irrelevant information.

Skills Section

  • You can really make this section stand out by reviewing the job ad you’re applying for and include any specific skills, abilities and experience you have that will be beneficial for the new role.
  • It is tempting to include as much information as possible, but too many skills will detract from your areas of expertise. My advice would be to try choosing6-8 hard skills that include job-specific tasks you've mastered, software program proficiencies, and equipment familiarity.

Experience/Work History Section

  • It's often difficult to decide what to write for job descriptions. One strategy is to think in terms of how you made a difference. Describe what impact you had, what you changed or what you improved while in the position.
  • You have a lot of content here that can be eliminated to better focus your resume on your target job. Compare your experience to the job posting and eliminate anything not relevant to the position you seek.
  • Here are some questions to ask yourself to help identify what experience would be beneficial:
  • What would your manager say were your strengths?
  • What projects did you work on? What were the results?
  • Did you manage others, work on a team or serve customers? What did you accomplish?

Education Section

  • Use this section for your formal education and degrees only. Licenses, certificates and other courses should be listed in a separate section.
  • This section is bogged down with unnecessary information. Move, eliminate, and streamline to give employers a concise presentation of your education.

Grammar/Punctuation and Formatting

  • And finally, make sure you carefully proofread everything at least twice - do not count on spellcheck to catch everything! Any grammar, punctuation or formatting error, no matter how small, will hurt your chances of getting an interview.
  • I sincerely hope my suggestions are helpful. By following the tips I’ve outlined in this review, you’ll have a resume that will serve you well in today’s job market.
  • I wish you the best of luck with your job search!
  • Andrea Loraine
  • Resumewriting@resume-now.com
  • Www.resume-now.com

Timeline

Elite Guard Plans & Programs - USAF
07.2024 - Current
Ramon Toro Bolier