I want to be to specific. I am trying to lend a management role either in HR or different areas.
Strategic Senior Talent Acquisition Coordinator with 7+ years of experience in human resources management, specializing in the healthcare sector. Proven track record in overseeing talent acquisition processes, optimizing recruitment strategies, and enhancing operational efficiency at Children’s National Hospital and Community Concepts. Skilled in project management, strategic planning, and fostering strong employer-employee relationships. Proficient in HR software and systems to drive growth in high-stakes, $10M revenue environments. Thrives in fast-paced settings and poised to leverage leadership skills for organizational success.
I shared my draft with 2 other team members and they both think the resume is not strong enough, and I agree. I am trying to land a management role. I understand you are condensing, which is good, but please make it stand out. I am re-attaching the job descriptions. They also mentioned you didn’t highlight some of the previous job descriptions. They say it can be all tied into HR if you look closer. I would also like to work for Deloitte or another company in the consulting aspect. Can you kindly take another look at my draft resume and see how you can incorporate? They agree about not adding all the job positions in the resume, but we feel that you can also add those job descriptions as part of my tasks because it.