Current student at the University of Arizona pursuing a career in the medical field. Studying a bachelor of science in Care, Health and Society. With interest in the fields of Home Health Aide, Hospital Receptionist and Social Worker. I am motivated in seeing that every patient receives fair treatment from a medical hospital.
Las Cruces High School Honor Roll. Graduation year 2024., University of Arizona’s Dean’s List 4 semesters continuously. From 2024 to 2026. Expected graduation year of 2028.
Feedback -
1.) Hi Javier, Your resume looks great. I found the part about NROTC particularly impressive. It clearly presents your abilities and expertise that can be applied in any of the three careers.
I highly recommend revising the professional summary because “Studying a bachelor of science...” and “With interest in the fields...” are sentence fragments, and combining them into complete sentences would make the introduction better.
Moreover, consider listing only your city and state instead of your full street address for privacy. Many scammers on online platforms can use niche information, such as your address, to do scamming things. I also looked at your awards section and noticed "Honor Role". I think you meant “Honor Roll” instead of “Honor Role”. Unless it's an actual thing, then don't change it.
Overall, your experiences provide a strong foundation, and clearer formatting and wording would make your qualifications stand out more effectively.
2.)Hello Javier, I read through your resume I liked your summary it was very clear and concise. I like the bullet points it made it very easy to read and follow through.
A recommedation I would make is since your interested in home health aide,hospital receptionist and social worked I would add more to the expirence you gained while you were in the shadowing program.
3.) Hi Javier,After reading through your resume I like how it clearly shows your interest in the medical field. Also that it includes experience that relates to health care, especially your shadowing experience. One suggestion I have would be to make your experience descriptions shorter and start each bullet point with a strong action verb. Overall your resume was great and I was easily able to understand you.